Talk:CosplayedLunatic/@comment-76.226.145.225-20150303012300

Just going to point out a few issues with this character so that you can improve them.

First, she's way too brightly colored. If you look at all the canon trolls, they mostly just wear black with a few small bits of bright color, like Vriska's shoes.

Also, if her zodiac sign is Eevee, why does it look more like a Pokeball? And it seems that troll versions of things have different names than their Earth counterparts, so maybe instead of Pokemon, she should like something like Trollmon?

And under relations, it lists several trolls as her siblings, but trolls don't have siblings. It shouldn't be too hard to just make them friends instead of related.