Talk:SneakyTrickster/@comment-24233566-20150724074203

well, you want constructive criticism.. let's see the errors.

first: you have a seadweller which is even higher blood than Feferi, which is pretty bad if you ask me, i suggest to change it

second: you describe her as a teal-cerulean blood, then why she's a seadweller? it doesn't make sense

third: as one of the anon said, this character looks like a clusterfuck of terezi and sollux parts, i suggest to use some other sprite bases to make it.

fourth: she looks a little mary-sue with all those weapons, also "land of fog and fanfics"... seriously?