Thread:LunarSplendens/@comment-24233566-20131222172515/@comment-5783141-20140107160834

Thanks. I guess having the ancestors in a simplistic style and the inverted selves more elaborate is because of two thngs. 1. I searched Beforus versions of the canon 12 trolls and they all had more elaborate and beautiful designs than the original on Alternia and 2. because I'm getting better at this sort of thing. As for the Wharf Rat, I hear you, my favorite detail on him is probably the tattoo of Serpia's symbol on his chest. ^w^

Now for the ancestor and inverted self.

There are few spelling errors on the word hermit. However they are both pretty good. Maybe a little more detail here and there wouldn't hurt. Only one thing stood out and it was the portmanteau torturefficer. I think it is kind of cool that you used it in the story I'm just not sure if it would be 100% okay with the creator considering SS is from Alternia and her dancestor is from Beforus.