Talk:DelightfullyDeviant/@comment-207.161.228.88-20100913031449

I think that you overdid the capitalization in the "Be the deviant chick" section. I think it would have more impact if you used it just a tad bit less often. For example, I might change the paragraph:

Most of what you come off as on TROLLIAN is just an ELABORATE FRONT, fashioned to make you seem more REASONABLE and LEVEL HEADED than you actually are. In reality, while you are FAIRLY EASYGOING by the standards of your kind, you have a tendency to FLIP THE FUCK OUT ABOUT STUPID SHIT. You keep your UNFATHOMABLE RAGE bottled inside for weeks without end, until it finally EXPLODES IN A GIANT CLUSTER FUCK OF CURSING AT INANE THINGS REALLY NOT WORTH THROWING A FIT ABOUT.

to something more like this

Most of what you come off as on Trollian is just an ELABORATE FRONT, fashioned to make you seem more reasonable and LEVEL HEADED than you actually are. In reality, while you are fairly easygoing by the standards of your kind, you have a tendency to flip the fuck out about STUPID SHIT. You keep your UNFATHOMABLE RAGE bottled inside for weeks without end, until it finally explodes in a giant CLUSTERFUCK of cursing at inane things really not worth THROWING A FIT ABOUT.

Thats just my opinion though.